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Sigh...

I love rhythm games like this... for example, the one on another site called Upbeat is awesome... but this one is just waay too laggy :(

If you could somehow streamline it and make it not lag as much that'd be great... maybe it's just my computer, but I can play other games just fine.

I like it, but..

It's a nice short piece, though I'm not feeling the 'hopelessness' you seem to want us to feel. With the DUN-dun of the string in the background, I find it's a driving piece to have us keep going, don't give up, we can still make it, etc.

The heavy-light string rhythm follows the method a knife/saw/etc would follow when cutting, usually when used in a song it's meant to catch attention, to make us listen, etc... At least, that's what I think :)

Keep up the good work, though, I know you can definitely improve from this.

Awesome

I really have to thank you, man. This song is just that amazing, I spent several hours until almost 4 in the morning listening to this.

It's so upbeat, and yet mellow. It calms me down, I can't really become angry at anything.

Aside from what people have already said, I have nothing to add.

Great stuff. <3

10/10, 5/5, Downloaded.

!!!

The song itself isn't bad, but the bass-line you have is a tad too repetitive. I've told you this already, but some variation on it would be nice.

The odd floaty instrument/pad (Arctic wind?) doesn't seem to have a melody to it, just kinda random.

Overall, 4/5, 8/10. Good song for a first attempt. Better than I've done. :P